Hello, posters are offering a good degree of specificity about the location chosen – well done. The posters could be more condensed, working more as a “unity” (rather than a series of tiles). To do this, you will find the need to be very selective about the work that “makes it” into the poster – it might not need to be everything, but rather a few select pieces. Particularly the paragraphs / bits of text in the posters, can be kept in your computer / sketchbook / journal; rather than in the posters.
These posters, as far as I can tell, aren’t propositional (yet). This is okay for the time being, but bear in mind that you will need to start identifying a “problem” (your own brief) soon.
One strength is that you seem to have started to explore your own unique visual language (a) perhaps based on satellite imagery, as in the first image, with text overlaid on top – although this text could be much more dense and data-driven or (b) perhaps referencing some of the old cartography that you have decided to include in poster 5.
As you know, some students will come to present their work, so that you can get a better idea on how to work and improve your course output. Until March, we won’t be having 1-1 tutorials, so this feedback is very important to take onboard until then. If you have further questions about this feedback, please do not hesitate to get back in touch. P
PS Also note, someone not familiar with this part of the world won’t know where they are from the co-ordinates alone. Consider drawing a dot on a larger map, as it is currently difficult to cross-reference between the different documents in the submission.
Hello, posters are offering a good degree of specificity about the location chosen – well done. The posters could be more condensed, working more as a “unity” (rather than a series of tiles). To do this, you will find the need to be very selective about the work that “makes it” into the poster – it might not need to be everything, but rather a few select pieces. Particularly the paragraphs / bits of text in the posters, can be kept in your computer / sketchbook / journal; rather than in the posters.
These posters, as far as I can tell, aren’t propositional (yet). This is okay for the time being, but bear in mind that you will need to start identifying a “problem” (your own brief) soon.
One strength is that you seem to have started to explore your own unique visual language (a) perhaps based on satellite imagery, as in the first image, with text overlaid on top – although this text could be much more dense and data-driven or (b) perhaps referencing some of the old cartography that you have decided to include in poster 5.
As you know, some students will come to present their work, so that you can get a better idea on how to work and improve your course output. Until March, we won’t be having 1-1 tutorials, so this feedback is very important to take onboard until then. If you have further questions about this feedback, please do not hesitate to get back in touch. P
PS Also note, someone not familiar with this part of the world won’t know where they are from the co-ordinates alone. Consider drawing a dot on a larger map, as it is currently difficult to cross-reference between the different documents in the submission.