Your work is commended for the fact that the poster works really well as a poster. I would encourage you to consider pursuing this methodology, as you have made the most out of the format (probably out of all submissions).
Sadly the file you have sent is quite low-res so it is hard to read the text. However the line of inquiry seems solid and I think can form the basis of a very successful project. Generally, some of your images could be larger, and your text could be smaller / shorter / less of it. Do bear in mind that the poster can work better as a “unity” (imagine as if this is for a competition submission) – rather than a series of tiles in a large piece of paper (which is more or less your current format). This means that you have to be VERY SELECTIVE about the work that goes on the poster, but doesn’t mean that you cannot research the area and geography in depth. The materials that don’t “make it” into the poster can be kept in a folder on your computer.
Please consider submitting a higher-resolution version (I also checked the version you emailed me, but still couldn’t read it!)
As you know, some students will come to present their work, so that you can get a better idea on how to work and improve your course output. Until March, we won’t be having 1-1 tutorials, so this feedback is very important to take onboard until then. If you have further questions about this feedback, please do not hesitate to get back in touch. P
Your work is commended for the fact that the poster works really well as a poster. I would encourage you to consider pursuing this methodology, as you have made the most out of the format (probably out of all submissions).
Sadly the file you have sent is quite low-res so it is hard to read the text. However the line of inquiry seems solid and I think can form the basis of a very successful project. Generally, some of your images could be larger, and your text could be smaller / shorter / less of it. Do bear in mind that the poster can work better as a “unity” (imagine as if this is for a competition submission) – rather than a series of tiles in a large piece of paper (which is more or less your current format). This means that you have to be VERY SELECTIVE about the work that goes on the poster, but doesn’t mean that you cannot research the area and geography in depth. The materials that don’t “make it” into the poster can be kept in a folder on your computer.
Please consider submitting a higher-resolution version (I also checked the version you emailed me, but still couldn’t read it!)
As you know, some students will come to present their work, so that you can get a better idea on how to work and improve your course output. Until March, we won’t be having 1-1 tutorials, so this feedback is very important to take onboard until then. If you have further questions about this feedback, please do not hesitate to get back in touch. P